Main Shayar to Nahi.....
Meri Pichli post se ek insaan ko shikayat thi, shayad isliye kyunki main uska shukria ada karna bhool gaya tha. Actually my last post was edited by Isha before i published it, and ya the credit goes to her for framing it so well. No wonders most of the comments appreciated the presentation part.
to is insaan k liye ek sher arz hai
Jo bhi gila tha shikwa tha shikayat thi usko bayan karne ka shukria
koi aarzoo agar teri poori kar sakein, aisi har khwahish sara-ankhon par rakhenge
Is meherbaani ka bhi hum dil se maanenge shukria
tu hai sabun hamam, butter chicken k saath garma garam naan
Rhyme karne k liye maine fit kiye ye word tamam but on a serious note
mere dil k har hasrat yahi kehti hai ki Tu ek ghazal hai
jiski pakiza shaksiyat ko is shayar ka salaam!!!!
Well this post is dedicated to all my friends. Any good quality in me is because of the company in which i am living.
But this time i am not interested in writing a lengthy description so is baar zara sa hatke kuch kia jaaye. Toh aadmi wahi purana hai par bas andaaz zara shayrana hai
Dunia mein kitne log aaye kitne gaye
samandar mein leherein aayi aur waapis laut gayi
sadian badli mausam badle, par kuch log meri zindagi mein aise aaye
k khuda bola tere liye hi bheja inhe maine ae nadaan,
phir bhi poochta hai kaise meri taqdeer badal gayi!!
Aseem, Prerit, Rajat and Priam
Ek gumnaam si shaksiyat tha main
shaayad kuch kami thi meri kabiliyat mein
zindagi kaise jeete hain, us falsafe k talaash thi mujhe
sikhaya mujhe apne ko pesh karne ka tareeka jinhone
yahan tak ki sikhaya mujhe mohabbat karna jinhone
kaash aaj hum unko ye samjha paate
k mohabbat us baarish k tarah hai
jisme haath to bheeg jaate hain par haath khaali reh jaate
Shilpa, Aritri and Natasha
Kuch arz karte hain kuch bhi karte hain to tareef k bol barsaati ho har dam
Ye Sochti hogi kya kasak hai?kiske liye likhte hain hum
Ya phir humara kya gaya agar ek bebas shayar ka hosla buland karein
To phir aapko aaj bata dein ki khabar tak nahin aapko,
aap hi ki shaksiyat ke hain ham maddaah
Ab agar kahein bhi ke aap jaisa shaista banana hi hain humari justujoo to kya kahein
[Maddaah = admirer Justujoo=effort to achieve Shaista=Well Behaved]
Pulkit, Gaurav Parashar, Rohit Vaish, Ashish Gupta, Neavin and Abhinav
Zara sa uchale to aasman ka sabse chamkeela sitara apna kar liya
Bahein phailayin to sara jahan samet liya
Phir bhi aaj tak zameen pe per tike rahe tumhare
Dil se nahi Dimaag se socha to saara aalam apna kar liya
Sid, Bhavna, Harsh, Ankur, Karry, Dhruv, Malav, Mohta, Kohli, Bharat, Aneesh and Chammu (he's there in two categories)
Khulke jio apni khushi ka izhaar karo,
dosti ko har tarah se nibhao ye kehte hain
Doston k muskurahat inki pehchaan hai
sabki khushi inki jaan hai
Tumhare sajde mein mera sar jhukta hai doston
jab koi kehta hai tumhare dost hi tumhari shaan hai
MPSC,Zubeen,Shikhar, Abhishek,Aakar, KV, Chammu, Ghanshyam, Niraj, Ipsit, Parashar and Dev
Andhion mein chiraagh k tarah jalte rahe
Diye k lauh k tarah saara andhera apne andar samete
par dunia ko chupchaap roshan karte rahe
Inhone sirf saadgi se jeena seekha aur har choti khushi sametate rahe
Lekin utna hi hosla ye rakha karte hain
kehte hain manzil abhi aur door hai humari
Chaand Sitaarey to raaste mein haath milaya karte hain
Pratishtha, Jai, Himanshu,Rishabh and Ajitesh
Zindagi k rangmanch k ye haseen kalakar jab bhi maidan mein utare
us din har shrota ne kaha k wah kya khoob dikhaya hai khela
inki har ek choti harqaton ko dekh-dekh kar jaaga mere andar ka kalakar
kaafi kuch seekhna inse abhi bhi baaki hai
par in logon ki kala ko mera namaskar
Aur ye kehkar is mehfil ko anjaam doonga ki
Ek kashmakash mein jeeta hoon
bhaagte lamho mein khud k liye fursat dhoondhata hoon
Phir bhi kyun itna bhaagta hoon shayad intezaar karta hoon is kaabil banane ka
k jis din maroon us din upar waale ko keh sakoon
k dekh maula meri maut pe dunia k har ek aankh se aansoon chalka
Kuch lafzon mein humne apni zindagi likh di
Doston k saath beete har pal ki khushi likh di
Jab humne utara apne lafzon ko is khidki par to logon ne kaha
Wah kya Ghazal Likh di!!!
PS: Koi choota ho to maaf karna yaar
to is insaan k liye ek sher arz hai
Jo bhi gila tha shikwa tha shikayat thi usko bayan karne ka shukria
koi aarzoo agar teri poori kar sakein, aisi har khwahish sara-ankhon par rakhenge
Is meherbaani ka bhi hum dil se maanenge shukria
tu hai sabun hamam, butter chicken k saath garma garam naan
Rhyme karne k liye maine fit kiye ye word tamam but on a serious note
mere dil k har hasrat yahi kehti hai ki Tu ek ghazal hai
jiski pakiza shaksiyat ko is shayar ka salaam!!!!
Well this post is dedicated to all my friends. Any good quality in me is because of the company in which i am living.
But this time i am not interested in writing a lengthy description so is baar zara sa hatke kuch kia jaaye. Toh aadmi wahi purana hai par bas andaaz zara shayrana hai
Dunia mein kitne log aaye kitne gaye
samandar mein leherein aayi aur waapis laut gayi
sadian badli mausam badle, par kuch log meri zindagi mein aise aaye
k khuda bola tere liye hi bheja inhe maine ae nadaan,
phir bhi poochta hai kaise meri taqdeer badal gayi!!
Aseem, Prerit, Rajat and Priam
Ek gumnaam si shaksiyat tha main
shaayad kuch kami thi meri kabiliyat mein
zindagi kaise jeete hain, us falsafe k talaash thi mujhe
sikhaya mujhe apne ko pesh karne ka tareeka jinhone
yahan tak ki sikhaya mujhe mohabbat karna jinhone
kaash aaj hum unko ye samjha paate
k mohabbat us baarish k tarah hai
jisme haath to bheeg jaate hain par haath khaali reh jaate
Shilpa, Aritri and Natasha
Kuch arz karte hain kuch bhi karte hain to tareef k bol barsaati ho har dam
Ye Sochti hogi kya kasak hai?kiske liye likhte hain hum
Ya phir humara kya gaya agar ek bebas shayar ka hosla buland karein
To phir aapko aaj bata dein ki khabar tak nahin aapko,
aap hi ki shaksiyat ke hain ham maddaah
Ab agar kahein bhi ke aap jaisa shaista banana hi hain humari justujoo to kya kahein
[Maddaah = admirer Justujoo=effort to achieve Shaista=Well Behaved]
Pulkit, Gaurav Parashar, Rohit Vaish, Ashish Gupta, Neavin and Abhinav
Zara sa uchale to aasman ka sabse chamkeela sitara apna kar liya
Bahein phailayin to sara jahan samet liya
Phir bhi aaj tak zameen pe per tike rahe tumhare
Dil se nahi Dimaag se socha to saara aalam apna kar liya
Sid, Bhavna, Harsh, Ankur, Karry, Dhruv, Malav, Mohta, Kohli, Bharat, Aneesh and Chammu (he's there in two categories)
Khulke jio apni khushi ka izhaar karo,
dosti ko har tarah se nibhao ye kehte hain
Doston k muskurahat inki pehchaan hai
sabki khushi inki jaan hai
Tumhare sajde mein mera sar jhukta hai doston
jab koi kehta hai tumhare dost hi tumhari shaan hai
MPSC,Zubeen,Shikhar, Abhishek,Aakar, KV, Chammu, Ghanshyam, Niraj, Ipsit, Parashar and Dev
Andhion mein chiraagh k tarah jalte rahe
Diye k lauh k tarah saara andhera apne andar samete
par dunia ko chupchaap roshan karte rahe
Inhone sirf saadgi se jeena seekha aur har choti khushi sametate rahe
Lekin utna hi hosla ye rakha karte hain
kehte hain manzil abhi aur door hai humari
Chaand Sitaarey to raaste mein haath milaya karte hain
Pratishtha, Jai, Himanshu,Rishabh and Ajitesh
Zindagi k rangmanch k ye haseen kalakar jab bhi maidan mein utare
us din har shrota ne kaha k wah kya khoob dikhaya hai khela
inki har ek choti harqaton ko dekh-dekh kar jaaga mere andar ka kalakar
kaafi kuch seekhna inse abhi bhi baaki hai
par in logon ki kala ko mera namaskar
Aur ye kehkar is mehfil ko anjaam doonga ki
Ek kashmakash mein jeeta hoon
bhaagte lamho mein khud k liye fursat dhoondhata hoon
Phir bhi kyun itna bhaagta hoon shayad intezaar karta hoon is kaabil banane ka
k jis din maroon us din upar waale ko keh sakoon
k dekh maula meri maut pe dunia k har ek aankh se aansoon chalka
Kuch lafzon mein humne apni zindagi likh di
Doston k saath beete har pal ki khushi likh di
Jab humne utara apne lafzon ko is khidki par to logon ne kaha
Wah kya Ghazal Likh di!!!
PS: Koi choota ho to maaf karna yaar
10 comments:
ohk main thode jhatke me hun...i mean m amazed...totaly surprised...aapne khudne likhi hai har shayari kya???
kya likha hai...by god hum to fida ho gaye...
hydrabad me jaakar kya khaa rahe ho....sab thik hai na??
loved it...jitni taariff karun kam hai...its different as well...
aapki kalmo ki tariff karne k liye shabd na rahe humare paas,
aapne to apne shabdo se is nacheez ko bhi bana diya hai khaas.....
ya that was written by me tho took some of the urdu words from net.......;)....thanks for appreciating it!!!and ya i can never think of reachin to your standards......
ok....nice 1...but...shayari thodi bore lag rahi hai....but good attempt...jitni meri taarif meri ki hai....i m nt tht much...so thnx a lot for tht compliment
Awesome! Strange ghosts of Hyderabadi Nizams have taken residence in your mind, lately.
Although next time, do supply a Hindi/Urdu dictionary too!
peace re :)
well written
ahem ahem.....ITS LOAD...DAMN HEAVY...das d first thing wich came to my mind...wots wid ur urdu vocab....kaafi sahi ho gayi h..(das d best praise frm me.."i cn c d potential in u"..lol..;)..:P..)
i guess d last para is d best...actually wot i've heard u say often..
i'l go 1 by 1 on dis...:
1st para samjh mai aaya...thanks a lot....i nu m so damn NICE...BEYONDS WORDS TO EXPRESS,....;P...:..:D
2nd para nai samjha...too elaborated wid diff words...miyan...thoda kamm hyderabadi jhaado...!!!
3rd is gud...precisely wot dey r to u i think....tru n flattering at d same tym..;)
4th and 5th are again for frenz...again 2 categories of frenz...das what i understood....4th para is for high profile frenz...and 5th for some coy types...i liked d 5th 1 better dan d 4th ,personally....
6th is ur abt ECA idols...:)...very well put....n so d credit goes to dem .
n d last...as i told u...i liked it more than d verses u wrote...so ...das it
n nw....zyada upar mat chadhna ...u gonna get loads of accolades frm ur frenz for dese..
well...das common courtesy...u no...to respond to d flattery u've showered on dem...;)...:P...
but das it...baad mai sab bak to normal...ok...
post dis....2nd para thoda kam samjh aaya...or to sab mast h...WAAH...nw i cn say...my dad's a PROSE WRITTER...eh....sounds gud..."!"!"!"!""!!""!"...:D
PS: sry ...4got to mention d credit u gave to miss modi....special attention haan...sahi h ...sahi h...
anjaney sahi hai yaar,,,,,,
aaapka shayarana andaaz dekh ke, hume bhi shayari ka bukhar chad gaya,
par phir dhalte suraj ki tarah,
yeh bhi dhal gaya;;;; ha..ha..
newyas i agree with the person above; the 5 th para( and nt paara) is so well written;
(this might suck..but still, my attempt)
wah anjaney,
aapke bhaari shabdon ko samajhne me waqt zaroor laga,
magar jab samajh aaye to yeh "infer" kiya:
doston ko makhhan lagane ki had paar kardi,
khiyaalon ki sarhad paar kar di,
zara yeh to bataiye kaunsi lughat istemaal ki? ;-)
mian zubeen aapne meri ek baar mein maar di.......
"mian"..u seriously need to stop mocking me like that...
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